A good employer proposal fits on two pages and answers the questions the employer will ask before they sign: what employees get, what it costs, how enrollment works, how billing works and what happens next. Copy the outline below and fill in your own details.
Page one: what they get
- A short opening. One paragraph on who you are, where you are and why you're writing to this employer.
- What the membership includes. Visits, access by phone or text, appointment times, any included labs or procedures.
- What it doesn't include. Specialists, hospital care, imaging, and anything billed separately. Say how extras are priced and who pays. Here's how to handle extras.
- Who can enroll. Employees, and whether spouses and children can join.
- How employees start. Sign-up steps and how soon they can book a first visit.
Page two: the business terms
- Price. Per employee per month, and per dependent if they're separate. Show a yearly total for the expected enrollment.
- Enrollment. Any minimum, and when people can join or leave. Here's how to think about minimums.
- Billing. Monthly invoice date, payment due date, and how you'd like to be paid.
- The employee list. Who sends it and by what day each month.
- Reporting. A quarterly summary with totals only, never individual health information.
- Term. Start date, length and renewal.
- Next steps. What you need from them to start, and by when.
Example price line
In a made-up example: "$70 per enrolled employee per month. $35 per enrolled dependent. Based on 30 employees and 10 dependents, about $2,450 a month, or $29,400 a year."
Check the math twice. A wrong total in a proposal is the first thing an employer remembers.
What to leave out
- Savings promises you can't source.
- Your costs and margins.
- Legal terms. Those belong in the contract, reviewed by your attorney.
What I'd do this week
- Fill in this outline once with your standard terms.
- Have someone outside the practice read it and tell you what's unclear.
- Save it as a template, so each new proposal takes minutes.
Common questions
Is a proposal a contract?
No. It describes the offer. The contract sets the binding terms, and your attorney should review it.
Should the proposal have an expiration date?
Yes. A line saying the pricing holds for 30 or 60 days keeps an old quote from coming back a year later.
Should I include testimonials?
Only real ones, with permission. A short quote from a current employer client helps more than a long list.
Want proposal pricing built on your real numbers?
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